Here is my opinion about what you should NOT do : Do not make the character OP i don't know why people think that anyone would to read about how very powerful and majestic character they have Leave some space for character development you mentioned SAO don't make a character similar to Kirito he had no space for character development and got me bored in 2 episodes. Don't make this the cliché story of a vampire who fell in love with a werewolf or vice versa. We already got shitloads of fantasy super natural games make something modern or sci-fi like ben 10 alien force, ultimate alien watch some super natural series like The 100, supernatural and read the World of Darkness books they are amazing. Note : Romcom supernatural story would be interesting if it is not cliché tho. The key to write a good story is to read alot of books Woops, i wrote a wall of text sorry.

I enjoyed the presentation ( you rarely see a clean and good one ) but frankly the story is flawed first of his name should not be Alex because that is not a Somali name..( My grand father from my mother side is somali so i pretty much know their culture ) maybe change it to something arab-ish? Second is that why would he go to the south eastern portion of the united states instead of staying in somalia since it is a much safer place for him? Third is that there no routes to be discovered anymore as far as i know this game is based in our modern age. There is also rank related mistakes google modern pirates ranks for more info. In the rules you mentioned equality but pirates did not respect women nor talked to anyone from an another religion. These are the ones i picked from many i wish you could fix these flaws or at least change the name from alex stryker to something more arab-ish. Have a good day

I guess intec ( no pun intended lol ) will contact the community manager to get this straight and become the "main tech store in ash hill"

Don't be mean to him he is learning i had a rough time learning english because of people like you, why not fix the mistakes instead of mocking him.

This is really interesting message me if you need help.

Now that's a good story Off topic : OMFG i just lost on agar.io http://prntscr.com/aibki8

LOL, my sister did the same where are you from? OT: I'm going to be a guitarist maybe a drug dealer or a van driver or something like that.

Interesting! can't wait to see the rp

So is this is like a poster you find in the Underground ( the hidden place in the sewers or w/e ) or in the internet/ deep web?

Damn i hate to be the guy noticing mistakes or something like that but how did he attend university at the age of 18 or 17? also studied vehicle mechanics that will approx take between 3 --> 6 years while he worked at a garage and got engaged? then he moved to the identity island so did he finish university or something like that? i hope you make that part clear

*Stewart turn his head to Jack noticing that he is sweating then look at his briefcase wondering what is wrong with it* **Stewart doesn't really care about the briefcase** *Stewart look at the Masked man again and say* "I don't have a wallet i'm just like you broke but at least i have a decent job where i work legit " **Stewart points at the location where he put'd his guitar and box**

*Stewart puts his guitar on the ground, quietly stretching his hand reaching a backpack he opens it swiftly grab a knife and hide it in his sleeves* *Stewart crosses the road entering the shop* Stewart : Hello there *looks at the masked man* why are you doing this? (( note : you wont be able to see the knife since stewart hid it in his sleeves and if you want to know why he didn't run read his character profile )) @Dekan

Stewart Rert "I'm listening..." Basic Information Preferred Name: Stew Full Name: Stewart Darius Rert Age: 36 Date of Birth: 12/21/1980 Ethnicity: Caucasian. Gender: Male Sexuality: Straight Titles/Nicknames: Stephie, that hippie, high as fuck man. Occupation: None. Previous Occupations: He used to sell weed back in the day. Appearance Appeared Age: Late thirties. Height: 6.0 ft Weight: 170lbs Build: Muscular enough which indicates that he works out regularly. Skin Color: Pale. Eye Color: Blue Hair Style: His hair is quite long, he never let it hang down and keeps it in a pony tail. Hair Color: Black. Fashion: Anything comfortable. Tattoos: None, yet. Personality Nature: Caregiver. Since the world is so dangerous and hurtful, you've taken it upon yourself to look out for others' welfare. Perhaps you were once hurt, or you've seen too much suffering. Either way, you never want anyone to have to endure that pain again. You give of yourself to help others, and you mollify pan, take up others' problems, and lend a caring shoulder to those in need. Regain Willpower whenever you protect or nurture someone else. Your Compassion is your Strength. Your willingness to share makes a community, so that everyone can draw strength from one another. Even though you can't help everyone, you make a read difference for the few that you do encounter. Your Weakness is Smothering. Although you really want to help others, sometimes the best help is to let them take their knocks and overcome their own problems. Unless you learn to let go, you'll keep your charges from making their own meaningful accomplishments, successes, and failures. Demeanor: Thrill-Seeker. You live for the next high, the adrenaline surge, the rush of victory. Over the next horizon and in the next battle you'll find the exhilaration that comes from challenge and the surge of really feeling alive. Only on the edge can you find real satisfaction, and that's where you live. You have the Strength of Daring. You'll rush in where others fear to tread. Danger? Risk? Life's nothing without them, and you're up to any challenge. Your Weakness is Recklessness. Until you learn to weigh risks, you put it all on the line every day of your life. Some things are too valuable to be wagered so carefully. Temperament : Stewert appears to be a person to chill with, he doesn't care about anything but he'll go out of his way to help someone in need, he never passes up the opportunity to give a hand if someone needs it. That aside, he would do anything to have a great adrenaline rush, which makes him very reckless for his love of joyriding. He's found camping in the back of his minivan near places of nature, sometimes inside the forest, sometimes on the beach. It depends on his mood and how high he is. Miscellaneous Hobbies: - Traveling from place to place in hope to find people he can help. - Plays guitar from time to time and sings. - Working on his minivan and fixing whatever on his own. - Writes lyrics from time to time but then just rolls the paper and throws it away. - He used to build guitars, a hobby he picked after she passed away, the first guitar he made was for her, it was perfected. He made sure to bury it with her. He'd still work on a guitar if he thinks that person is good enough for one, or likes him enough to do so. Likes/loves: - Being high. - Adrenaline rush. - Releasing stress. - Helping someone. - His van and guitar. - Nature. - Spreading good in the world. Dislikes/Hates: - Back stabs. - Stereotypical cunts. - Someone to mess with his truck. - Drunk people. - Politicians. - Lawyers. Dreams and life goals: - Meeting new people that share the same point of view as he does. - Make peace finally happen between all the traditions. - Settle up and have children somewhere. - Grow some real fine ganja. - Fly a plane. PS: Well i was bored so i created this and i don't care if it's too soon or anything. One more thing : please don't post some TL;DR shitposts.

Not sure maybe stewart will share some of it with his friends when chillin. Thank you and i totally agree.

Damn you!

Ehh, andrew where can i find the percentage?

Guitar

Hey everyone. I've followed this game from the kickstarter , although I never bothered to make an introduction topic. My name's Iheb and I'm from Tunisia. I'm turning 18 in a few weeks. Enlisting into the ISI in around 4-5 months. I've been roleplaying since around 2010 I think, starting with lame GMod RP servers, up to well known SAMP servers. From there I moved onto a high standard RP server on MTA for a few years, and now I'm back here since I've gotten the itch for a good quality game and RP. Other than that, I play a lot of games of all genres, as long as it seems good to me, I play it. Used to play a lot of CSGO, was a Legendary Eagle although I played better, ranked up every few games, went inactive however. Here's my Skype if anyone wanna chat or something. Ihebouelhazi.ouelhazi although you should note that I'll most likely delete people who go silent on me, nothing personal. So if you think you'll wanna stay in contact, go ahead. So yeah, hello everyone, hope it's never too late for an introduction thread. See you in game? or forums :p.

Hmm, interesting i would love to work as a delivery man or something ( My character like to drive Vans :3 ). Anyways, i hope you post an application format soon.

If you don't leave anything that can let you get caught they can't revoke your license or anything. But if you Manslaughter according to the USA penal code your gun license will get revoked or even jail depending on the severity.

Thank you for the warm welcome my friend, i hope this is the beginning of a new friendship :D.